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Word UP!

Discussion in 'Off-Topic' started by IlGum, Jul 7, 2016.

  1. IlGum

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    WORD UP was born from something that can easily be explained but not easily understood. With any great creation, there is a sacrifice that needs to be paid and it will be paid by the visitors to the vibe. We want your hearts to flat line.

    Your richest deepest expression of who you are and how you see the world because we are hoping for one truly special thing to happen. Your words will be read and in some way move someone to action, to feeling, to purpose, or better yet, move you to find your action, your feeling, or your purpose.

    Feel free to share your thoughts, poems, whatever you want as long as related to the information above.


     
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  2. Squid

    Squid Ur Goldfish's lover Elite Member

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    :eek: that's cute
     
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    Squid Ur Goldfish's lover Elite Member

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    I was only looking at the second half haha, to me it's saying that your actions and words can affect someone else's life even if it's just a matter of picking up trash off the floor.
     
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    Not yet done editing. Haha!
     
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    Ooze armor..yes bikini
    Oracle robe no bikini
    *Bows lonelyly*
     
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  6. IlGum

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    There's no us anymore, no me and you
    You went and screwed it up by selling me out .... you've been evil
    It's a shame, because I really thought we were equal
    Regardless of skin colour, irrespective of different cultures
    I really wanted us to ride, walk side by side
    Holding hands and sharing the same dream of a fly life
    Moonlighting, or even bungee jumping off a rocky mountain
    Drinking lots of champagne from a bubbly fountain
    I had thoughts I would have shared with you
    It's fucked up that you wouldn't play fair with a dude
    Pull the hair off me too until my head is all bald
    Backbite me until I have no senses and fall
    I wanted this to be life, but you treated it like Hollywood
    If I could afford to give you a set, I probably could
    While you were busy roaming with other worldly dudes
    I was busy figuring out how to give the world to you


    PART 1
     
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  7. IlGum

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    While other men and women are enjoying good moments together
    I'm sitting in my room with my curtains closed on the weather
    I've lost my appetite with something bad inside
    that's caused a man to cry, and that's something that I can't deny
    Sometimes I look up to God and ask Him why
    He can't just change my sad life to a happy life
    You can't imagine what you put me through
    But I guess that's cool for you, because you weren't born stupid,
    boo
    You used me too, like a Rubix Cube
    Thinking you could turn me over and mix my mind up like fruity juice
    I'm sorry I ain't Soopafly, I'm not always whoopty-woop
    I don't listen to the same music as you do
    You should've learned to appreciate me
    Gee, baby - by doing this, you must've really hated me
    If that was so, why didn't you just give me an answer then
    instead of keeping a man in suspense like a mannequin?
    There's no us


    PART 2
     
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  8. IlGum

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    I can't take this, I don't really know what to make of this
    I'm in pain just like a girl who's just been done in by a rapist
    I seriously thought because you were Christian you were different
    and you were following a particular system
    But it seems that you're just like the other girls
    who want to screw every other stud in the world
    And just when I put you on the route to success
    You came and ripped my heart right out of my chest
    What were you thinking?

    I wanted us to be together, no lie
    But now because of you, there's no you and I
    You and I died the day you lied
    I'll never forget the day you made me cry

    There's no us anymore


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  9. RyeUshio

    RyeUshio The Blue Bull Super Likable Elite Member Epic Member

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    Cool word up. Failing in love is not a bad thing, that what makes it bittersweet. Also, you shouldn't blame everything on God. You are the master of your life, thus you're the only one who can fix it and make it better. ^_^
     
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    Exactly. Don't blame god. But there are some people who's like that. Thanks for the feedback. :) You can post yours too. Feel free.
     
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    I composed this poem while eating Manggo Cheesecake.

    You live to love,
    When you love to give.
    That life you never had
    Like forever, had no wealth.
    Still had a hand to help.

    All I have is
    dreams for myself
    grand plans for world
    and words to rhyme with strength.

    The world will change,
    it depends on range
    of rage or love we raise.
    Well thats a phase of world,
    where we stay
    some for months, some for days
    or its a game we play
    and score to glee.

    All above,
    We live to love
    and we need to give.
     
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    Cacen ych a fi!

    I love cake, cake is good.
    But this one I made tastes like mud!
    I'm not sure why, the recipe wasn't hard.
    All I needed was a few ingredients from my backyard.
    First some soil from the garden pots, then some leaves and flowers for the top.
    Mix with rain and a sprinkle of bugs, to me so far it looks real good!
    Bake in the sunshine for a minute or two.
    Then cut into slices so teddy can have some too.

    I love cake, cake is good.
    But I'm not sure why, this one tastes like mud!

    (Written by my mentally 8 year old self) ☺️
     
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  14. IlGum

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    Cacen ych a fi! means The ox me, Horrible, Ugh, yuck? Thank you for posting.
     
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    Mmhmm. thinking...............
     
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    Oh apologies I'm Welsh. Cacen ych a fi means..... "Cacen" is cake, and "ych a fi" means horrible. X
     
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    It's ok. Now i got it. :)
     
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    My pain and misery fall from the sky
    So hard I try to ignore it, but it still gets by.
    Surrounded with memories of what could have been,
    The hatred screams under my skin.
    Pulsing through my veins is the anger I feel.
    Wounds break open as soon as they seal.
    Darkness surrounds me with every step I take.
    I manage a smile, but do you know it's a fake?
    I laugh when people talk to me,
    But inside I'm dying, wishing they could see
    I'm as different inside as I am the same.
    Wish they could see they're not to blame.
    I know the truth, but it's locked in my heart,
    And now more than ever, it's tearing me apart.
     
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    I walk the face of earth once more,
    a mindless puppet, my strings are torn.
    the creaky bones, the bad eyesight,
    yet the chance to turn wrong to right.
    wars-a-waging, old mans guilt,
    the worlds now on more then just a tilt.
    parents weeping, children slain,
    bloody thoughts, fear will reign.
    I look in the shadows, a creature did lurk,
    he whispered to me, hiding a smirk.
    "Thou shalt be killed if thee can't find,
    the demon lurking in thou mind."
    So off I ventured, to quench my thirst,
    of corpses piled with hearts-a-burst.
    And on that quest what did I see?

    The Wicked Path Of Destiny
     
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    The heart beats in time with the sounds of drums
    The hand swaying to the violins chord
    Each note is remembered, thought about and adored
    As every soul in the room joins to the music and hums

    Each sliver of sound buzzing in the brain
    The lyrics with a thought about meaning
    put together with the guitar as it's loud screaming
    The melody that returns to bring my life back again
     

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