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Fan fiction part 3

Discussion in 'Off-Topic' started by Itachi Uchiha, Oct 12, 2015.

  1. Itachi Uchiha

    Itachi Uchiha Well-Known Member

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    Chapter 3: Head Hunter
    Head hunter heard a mysterious voice, he looked up and a horrible chill went down on his spine, an evil sorcerer Agha Memnon was returned from death, he was known as one who created underworld, his nether powers were overwhelming, hunter was about to fight his father's killer and a ruler of the hell...
    Head hunter: you will pay for my father's death you scum!
    memnon:your father was a weakling just like you, he was a shame of your family you must be greatful of me...
    Head hunter: you monster, how dare you speak about my father like that in from of me!!!
    Memnon: a monster? HAHAHAHAHA, no... I AM A DEMON!!! DEATH ITSELF FEARS ME!!!
    Head hunter: there are worse fates than death....
    Memnon:you have eyes... But you can't see....
    Head hunter: I will see you die!!!
    So the battle between evil and hero has started!!!
    By this time K4 was heading to the hall where his fight would happen...
    Ashkore: k4 our scouters just showed a great power but suddenly it FADED AWAY but now I can see another two great powers on my scouter is that u and rhino golem?
    K4: no but I am about to reach rhino golem...
    Ashkore: le me see its coordinates and stats for you....
    K4: ...
    Ashkore: k4 get outta there now!!! Golem's power is way higher that yours, you have no chance!!! Get outta there now!!!
    K4: sorry I already started so I'll finish it!!
    Ashkore: its an order sergant!! Do you really wanna defy me?
    K4: don't worry about me pal, I know what I am doing!!!
    Ashkore: no don't!!! I command you!!!! K4!!!! Respond now!!!
    K4: sorry boss I am loosing connection... I can't hear you!! Listen I gtg, talk to you after the mission...
    Ashkore:k4 don't!!!
    Lotus:what's going on?
    Ashkore:that idiot k4 wants himself dead, go and help him out NOW!!!
    Lotus: ....
    Lotus: OK, send me coordinates...
    Computer: Z:400
    X:256
    Y:-30
    Lotus: is this coordinates of the rhino golem's hall?
    Computer: confirmed
    Lotus: OK.. Hang on k4 I am on my way!!!
    Ashkore: go already Jesus Christ!!!
    Lotus: kk chill... I am off, returning to the mission...
    Ashkore:...
    Ashkore thoughts:hmm interesting... What is the other power levels? It's not mino or wolf... It is darker than eerie.... Head hunter is definitely fighting him.... Wait can it be? No... Agha Memnon is dead... I should stop being paranoid.... Anyways... Hope he's fine...
    At this time head hunter was desperately was trying to defeat an evil sorcerer Agha memnon...
    Head hunter's thoughts: damm it!!! He is stronger than I could ever dreamed of, he dodges my attacks like nothing happened... I am powerless against him...
    Memnon: what?! Don't say you're already tired...
    Head hunter: ...
    Memnon: we haven't even started a warm up.. Right?
    Head hunter's thoughts: this guy is insane... He is so strong.... I am doomed... There is no way I can defeat Memnon.. I am sorry Ashkore, I failed you....
    Wait a minute, my scouter just detected incredible power source coming this way, it even over comes memnon's.... Who is it? Is it an enemy?
    Memnon: you got lucky little brat!!! Your leader Ashkore is coming here, he is close... I won't risk my life for you... See you later weakling...
    Head hunter: ash is coming? Then you should run the hell outta here if you wanna keep your head on your shoulders Memnon....
    Ashkore: too late, I am already here
    Head hunter: thanks god, you are here in right time... Wait where did Memnon go? He ran away!!! We must catch him!!!
    Ashkore: screw Memnon, k4 needs our help get up and follow me as fast as you can, we must be there in an hour
    Head hunter: ....
    Head hunter: I guess... K lead the way....
    Ashkore: very well
    Ashkore's thoughts: hang on k4 we are on our way....please don't die... We need you...
    By this time corruption of eerie is growing, can team frost save their friend and entire world? Is Agha Memnon ally of crystal? Find out in the next part of the fan fiction: morbus chronics...

    To be continued-​

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  2. Itachi Uchiha

    Itachi Uchiha Well-Known Member

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    Sorry guys that every part is so short, I just don't have time enough to make bigger ones, I really appreciate those who read these threads and I'll make these daily so every day you will get new but small part of the story, hope you wont hate for that and hope you'll enjoy the series :D
     
  3. kariin

    kariin Patience is a Virtue Staff Member MODERATOR Super Likable Elite Member Wiki Contributor Epic Member

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    I think u can put all your parts together in 1 thread, makes it easier to locate.
     
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  4. Miyako

    Miyako Huehuehue Elite Member

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    So confused >< What is even happening? I don't think this fan fiction is anything like toram... Or is it something different and I'm just confused... again. ><
     
  5. Itachi Uchiha

    Itachi Uchiha Well-Known Member

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    Lol miya, you should've read first and second part before reading third :D and fan fiction means something that was never added but fans create it, this is whole new story about toram and of course it has nothing to do with original gameplay, take it as a tale ;) I'll leave links to the first and second part:
    1) http://toramonline.com/index.php?threads/fan-fiction-part-1.2910/
    2)http://toramonline.com/index.php?threads/fan-fiction-part-2.2921/
     
  6. Miyako

    Miyako Huehuehue Elite Member

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    But i already read them both lol XD But if it isn't like the original plot doe~ Thats confusing~
     
  7. Itachi Uchiha

    Itachi Uchiha Well-Known Member

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    That's why it is a fan fiction it has nothing to do with original story, it is what if scenario, its my own story lol mmo rpgs have lots of fan fictions so I felt like making one, this story has nothing to do with the original gameplay it is just for fun so you can say it is tale that toram elves used to tell XD
     
  8. Miyako

    Miyako Huehuehue Elite Member

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    Oh XDD Sorry lol X3
     
  9. Itachi Uchiha

    Itachi Uchiha Well-Known Member

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    No problem:D
     

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