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Fan fiction: Morbus chronics part 4

Discussion in 'Off-Topic' started by Itachi Uchiha, Oct 13, 2015.

  1. Itachi Uchiha

    Itachi Uchiha Well-Known Member

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    Chapter4: war of worlds have started​

    Last time on Morbus chronics, Lotus was sent on the mission to rescue k4, promoted spec ops of the rugio force and a member of the team Frost, by this time head hunter also a member of the Frost faced his father's murderer Agha Memnon, where he fails but thankfully Ashkore reached strum road in time and scared off an evil sorcerer what will happen next?! Find out in this part of the Morbus chronics.

    Lotus: computer connect me to the gama base' general Bayan

    Computer:host has been sent, waiting signal to respond....
    Lotus: come on general, you have to answer...
    Computer:base located, host was accepted
    Lotus: hello, general can you hear me?
    Bayan:yes speak lotus, what is it?
    Lotus: general Ashkore sent me on a mission to rescue k4 from the rhino golem, my scouter says that outside is defended by the stone garrison, I can't break through their defence please send reinforcement...
    Bayan: garrison? Of stones? You mean minions of rhino golem?!
    Lotus:yes and as far as I know twice more is guarding inside plus they have walls around the ruins and watch towers every 30 meters...
    Bayan: nonsense!! They can't even shoot!!!
    Lotus: my scouter says there are 5 different power levels in ruins area, by the levels and their hostility I can tell what creatures are they...
    Bayan: go ahead...
    Lotus: lowest levels belong to stones... Then little higher levels belong to ruins rutins that shoot lightning on far distances, that explains the watch towers, then it comes skeletons of the ruins and their general gold scream, next high level belongs to k4 and the highest factor is rhino golem's...
    Bayan: I see... So you need not only reinforcement... You need strategist either..
    I can't come there cuz I have my own mission but I'll send Taltal and his people to you, Taltal is my nephew and he is smarter than anyone ever lived, let the victory be upon us...
    Lotus: thank you general, I am greatful of your support
    Bayan: take care Lotus... End of line...
    Lotus: OK Taltal like in old times we have to do stuff together....
    By this time Ashkore and Head hunter met Taltal and his crew on the way and decided to join them...
    Taltal: Grand master... Me and my crew greet you and your mate
    Ashkore: ahh Taltal, my greatest student, long time no see... How is your crazy uncle doing?
    Taltal: general Bayan is OK, he sent me to the zoktsa ruins by request of lotus, your employee
    Ashkore: ....... Very well me and hunter are going right there we must hurry otherwise tragedy may happen...
    Taltal: then we have no time to loose...
    Head hunter: agreed besides there are more threats on the way... Nobody knows what can show up...
    Ashkore: enough with talk lets keep moving...
    Head hunter: yes
    Taltal:yes sombe
    Taltal's crew: YES GENERAL!!!

    So they went to zoktsa ruins, by this time K4 met new threat on his way...
    K4: almost made it...
    <unknown voice>: don't be to happy cause you just reached your end!!!
    K4:Who.............. And what are you?
    Torazul: I am the great torazul brother of the mighty sorcerer Agha Memnon, he sent me to kill you...
    K4: yeah, like I will believe you, Agha Memnon is dead and even if he would be alive he wouldn't ally with eerie, cause he wants to rule the world not to destroy it...
    Torazul: either ways you die here!!!
    K4: not if I'll kill you first!!!
    Torazul rushed at k4 and tried to rip him apart by his force slash, but thanks for k4's agility he was managed to dodge the attack and counter strike the warlock, battle was hard but not long, indeed it ended very fast, Torazul was very strong, his strength was enough to break the mountain into little shreds but he was slow so he couldn't even deal a dangerous damage to k4, unfortunately for torazul his strength takes too much stamina and power which means he got tired very soon and got exterminated by raging warrior...
    By this time Memnon was watching the events from the under world...
    Memnon: ugh this idiot Torazul!!! He couldn't even kill that little brat!! Death is way too much honor for him!!!
    Hades: be patient Memnon Torazul was a sacrifice for our future glory....
    Memnon: I allied with that crystal cause of one thing...
    Hades: and what is that one thing?
    Memnon: after so many years in the nether my powers have weakened... Eerie promised me if I'll kill at least few members of frost then he would restore my powers...
    Hades: what if he lied?!
    Memnon:: he will regret it...
    Hades:how? Do you count on me?!
    Memnon: yes Hades, you are a death god... It will be no problem for you to slay that crystal...
    Hades: ....... I see.... Either ways, we mustn't allow rhino golem to kill k4, you must do it by your own!!!
    Memnon: Watch your tongue Hades... Go and bring me his head and remember if you fail, I'll replace his head with yours...
    Hades: yes ma'lord.....
    So the death god hades which is stronger than eerie itself went to destroy k4, can Ashkore, Head hunter, Lotus, Tal Tal and his crew reach zoktsa ruins in time?
    Find out on the next part of Morbus chronics

    To be continued-​
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  2. Miyako

    Miyako Huehuehue Elite Member

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    /)u< Yew gotta make all the parts in one thread... it's kinda hard to follow~.
     
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  3. Itachi Uchiha

    Itachi Uchiha Well-Known Member

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    Lol I thought about it but it would be lame, I know it is an issue among with that it has no pictures and it is short but as short as it is it takes me and Lich King hours, sorry for issues (lol sometimes it even annoys me) but it is hard to keep new story going every day and it is hard to say when it will come out cuz of different time zones, hope it won't be a huge problem for viewers ;) but if it will annoy ppl too much I'll try to fix it some how ;)
    I dunno if this may help you but I post this fan fiction threads every day in off topic and you can just type Morbus chronics and part you wanna see, tomorrow it will be part 5 and hope you will like it ;)
     
  4. Miyako

    Miyako Huehuehue Elite Member

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    Kk~ But you could just "Bump ;)" Your fan fiction thread and announce it on your status or something. It's hard to follow if its out of sorts lol :3
     

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