Fencer build help

Hello, I am new to toram (started 3 weeks ago). I am working on this build, I need your comments haha.

Stats, Str>Dex

Skills:

Blade skills:
-Hard hit 5
-Astute 10
-Trigger Slash 6
-Sonic Blade 10
-Spiral Air 10
-Sword Mastery 10
-Quick Slash 10
Sword Techniques 10

magic:
-mp charge 1

Survival:
-Short rest 5
-HP Boost 10
-Safe rest 5
-MP Boost 10

Shot Skills:
- Bow Mastery 5
- Long Range 5
-Quick Draw 10

Below optional:

Knight skills:
-Assault Attack 5
- Parry 10

Guard Skills:
-Light Armor mastery 10

Items should focus on evasion, i.e lightweight knife, mole eyes, rapier (she's a fencer!), light armor. I wonder if parry decreases evasion rate.

What do you guys think?